Capital Furs

so here is what im thinking we each take turns writing a line to make a poem.

rules: (cause i think we need them) dont write more then 2 lines at once and keep the sentence tempo. also try and follow the image that is being created. when we get bord with this one we can start a new one. :D other then that i think this is pretty straight forward, oh and also wait for like 2 or 3 pple to post a line before you post one again.

here is the first line


I was here, but now I'm not

In the dark, so black and hot

Stars above, no moon tonight

so far

I was here, but now i"m not,
In the dark, so black and hot,
Stars above, no moon tonight,
They bathe my flesh in soft light,

I was here, but now i"m not,
In the dark, so black and hot,
Stars above, no moon tonight,
They bathe my flesh in soft light,

Now shut your mouth you lazy cow,

I was here, but now i"m not,
In the dark, so black and hot,
Stars above, no moon tonight,
They bathe my flesh in soft light,

Now shut your mouth you lazy cow,
from your flesh, i'll make kitten chow!

I was here, but now i"m not,
In the dark, so black and hot,
Stars above, no moon tonight,
They bathe my flesh in soft light,

Now shut your mouth you lazy cow,
from your flesh, i'll make kitten chow!
Joking! I am not an ass.

I was here, but now i"m not,
In the dark, so black and hot,
Stars above, no moon tonight,
They bathe my flesh in soft light,

Now shut your mouth you lazy cow,
from your flesh, i'll make kitten chow!
Joking! I am not an ass.
And earlier lines may have been crass.

I was here, but now i"m not,
In the dark, so black and hot,
Stars above, no moon tonight,
They bathe my flesh in soft light,

Now shut your mouth you lazy cow,
from your flesh, i'll make kitten chow!
Joking! I am not an ass.
And earlier lines may have been crass.

I think that i shall never see
a furry as lovely as a tree

I was here, but now i"m not,
In the dark, so black and hot,
Stars above, no moon tonight,
They bathe my flesh in soft light,

Now shut your mouth you lazy cow,
from your flesh, i'll make kitten chow!
Joking! I am not an ass.
And earlier lines may have been crass.

I think that i shall never see
a furry as lovely as a tree
but there is a pie, that makes you high