Hello all, this is my first personnal story (as in not ordered to write it, just did it by myself), first tf story and first story to be published on the internet. I've written four chapters and have come back to edit the first one (it was kinda terrible). It's a transformation-themed story, and I try to make it as realistic as I can, therefore you are warned, there is minor cursing and a little blood.
Since people don't want 15000 word stories up online here, I'll link you to my account on FA. If there is enough request, I'll make other topics for my other chapters. Feel free to leave any feedback whatsoever, from 'ME LIEK!' to a whole essay on the conventionnal rules I've no doubt broken.
Anyhoo, enjoy!
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2465715/
